Thursday, February 11, 2016

Flowers I Planted In Your Navel. Comments

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Gross so gross
MerchandiZing it all
I know you
Have u not felt it?
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Sunny Adruza
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Palitha Ranatunge 12 February 2016

Yeh, its experimental and good. Little confusement in your using of 'she' and 'I'. Its a good and spontaneous selection of words in writing poems. As Plato said it is done not by you may be by a muse! thank you for the poem, Supriya!

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Sunny Adruza 14 February 2016

Leaving it all to the reader...for interpretation...thank u...

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