Yeh, its experimental and good. Little confusement in your using of 'she' and 'I'. Its a good and spontaneous selection of words in writing poems. As Plato said it is done not by you may be by a muse! thank you for the poem, Supriya!
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Yeh, its experimental and good. Little confusement in your using of 'she' and 'I'. Its a good and spontaneous selection of words in writing poems. As Plato said it is done not by you may be by a muse! thank you for the poem, Supriya!
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