Sunday, April 19, 2020

Flowers From A Man That I Cannot Rememberhis Name Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes, the flowers were buried in the green bin
And the card was put in the box
Where I put sentimental things
Like an old dog license that was
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Mj Lemon 27 April 2020

Those conflicted emotions! Years ago, I found the memories of those bad dates stood as much as the memories of the great ones. That 'great in-between, ' that has evaporated. A great verse LeeAnn.

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Kevin Patrick 20 April 2020

Dating is a tricky business, it can be horrifying and comedic at the same time, this work sums up those two feelings succinctly. It reminds me of the stuff my friend goes through, its funny though that even though its a bad experience, you can remember the persons name. Out of curiosity, I hope you didn't break his tooth! splendid work LeeAnn!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 April 2020

" From my first date" ! Memories. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 April 2020

Or tried to forget because I had a lousy time As he turned out to be a creep It wasn't that long ago I wish I knew his name. experiences in a tried love.. fine. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 April 2020

just smell the green box his name will just flash and read my third STANZA POEM LEEEEEEEEEEEE

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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