I thought if I took the flowers home
Flowers from a funeral
For a friend
A friend whose face
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Your pen... too sweet for words. Yes... I think she knew... and cared for the thoughts of a friend...
Not silly at all Susan - a lovely sentiment, and one I can relate to right now having been recently bereaved.
You write as SPONTANEOUS PROSE jack Kerouac invented spontaneous prose. Should look him up here. I love how your thoughts, feelings and intellect soars. If you don't mind me saying so, you write alot like Charles bulkowski. He's on here too! You got quite a talent that needs to be heard!