Wednesday, November 5, 2014

Flowers Comments

Rating: 4.8

In the auburn hairs of the earth I see,
Divinity of fragrance that says it's Me,
Diversity of beauty in Halloween of rainbows,
Feminity, Eve brought from the high meadows.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dimitrios Galanis 06 January 2016

Had I read the this poem before I wrote my ''The flower'' I'm sure I could make it better than I did.I do think of translating it into my native language, the greek.

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Hans Vr 09 November 2014

A poem that gives pure joy to the reader. What more can a reader expect from reading poetry. Excellent!

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Kevin Patrick 07 November 2014

I've read this three times in a row now, and I have to say its lovelier with each reading, your rhyme is sublime, you can never go wrong with flowers.

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 November 2014

A different poem on flowers, nice and lovely style.

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Valsa George 06 November 2014

How lovely you are, you are so much feminine, Oh pretty lovely flowers! You all are mine. Don't be so avaricious man! If you take all beautiful things for yourself, what will be left for us? Enjoyed this beautiful poem on flowers!

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Salini Nair 06 November 2014

Who gave golden ratio to the petals of flowers? .............flowers that speak the enigma of nature.........................nice

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Gajanan Mishra 05 November 2014

Love is precious, It is no more a mystery, thanks, , Please read my new poems and say something..

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