Friday, September 16, 2022

Flowers 05 - Hibiscus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Proud
gay and loud
red hibiscus.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx True Edge 21 July 2024

There is a sublime beauty in the delicate pink petals, beautfully captured and the metaphoric element blends with it perfectly

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Rebecca Navarre 18 September 2022

Such beautiful sentiments and heart expressed in this! .. Ever so thoughtful and heart warming! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Hi Becca, I am so grateful to you for the wonderful note that you have shared on the poem. Thank You.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 September 2022

Simply amazing! The analogy of flower and the woman is powerful and original. There's nothing like a crimson lipstick to transform your looks. I am sure all women would agree with you.

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Hi Nosheen, I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Whether other women agree with me or not, for me it suffices that you find some relevance to truth in the poem

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 17 September 2022

My gratitude to Rose Marie, Sandra and LeeAnn.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 17 September 2022

I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Feels great

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2022

A very unique and brilliant description of red hibiscus. Top Marks and to my Poem List!

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 16 September 2022

Thank You LeeAnn and Sandra for the most encouraging observations on the poem. Obliged.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 September 2022

as wonderful as the flower Bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 16 September 2022

A truly colorful treat in its simplicity and beauty.

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Sandra Feldman 16 September 2022

How adorable! So innocent and sweet but you have certainly captured the essence, of this unpretentious flower making it so very innocent and sweet.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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