Proud
gay and loud
red hibiscus.
Lack of fragrance
she tries to make up,
like a lady wearing
crimson lipstick.
There is a sublime beauty in the delicate pink petals, beautfully captured and the metaphoric element blends with it perfectly
Such beautiful sentiments and heart expressed in this! .. Ever so thoughtful and heart warming! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++
Hi Becca, I am so grateful to you for the wonderful note that you have shared on the poem. Thank You.
Simply amazing! The analogy of flower and the woman is powerful and original. There's nothing like a crimson lipstick to transform your looks. I am sure all women would agree with you.
Hi Nosheen, I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Whether other women agree with me or not, for me it suffices that you find some relevance to truth in the poem
My gratitude to Rose Marie, Sandra and LeeAnn.
I am so happy that you enjoyed the poem. Feels great
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How adorable! So innocent and sweet but you have certainly captured the essence, of this unpretentious flower making it so very innocent and sweet.