Tuesday, September 13, 2022

Flowers 04 - Thumba Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thumbappoo
a tiny white flower,
humble and unpretentious,
just the size of a grain
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

And Thank you for sharing the notes too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

Ohhhhh, How heart moving and beautiful! ... With the imagery so wonderfully captured! ...

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Immensely grateful, Becca, dear poet.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 16 September 2022

I had posted notes of gratitude to the comments by Rose Marie Juan Austin and Evelyn Judy Buehler. But they have vanished. Can anyone help?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 September 2022

Liked the ultimate stanza. A wonderful story.

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The very story behind celebration of Onam is intriguing. Emperor Mahabali ruled over the entire known world. Under his rule every citizen was happy and content. Then, the gods grew jealous of him and on their pleading, the Supreme God Mahavishnu banishes the Emperor to the netherworld.

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However, before leaving Earth, the Emperor requests leave of the Lord to visit his subjects once a year. The Onam day is marked by His Visit and therefore, the celebrations.

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Thank You Rose Marie, for the wonderful notes on the poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 September 2022

A vivid and brilliant depiction of a beautiful plant and flower. Very informative. The compelling images made me at close range with these fragrant and lovely flowers.

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Thank You, dear poet friend

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 September 2022

I enjoyed reading this very interesting and informative, well crafted poem.5 stars!

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Immense gratitude to you, dear poet. Your words show that you could relate to the contents of the poem. Thank You again

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It might be your love for Nature that attracts you to this poem. Thank You for reading and offering to comment

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 14 September 2022

The poem "A Rejoinder" has been deactivated by PoemHunter Administration, for reasons better known to them. Hence I share Dillipji's comments here.

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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 14 September 2022

Dr Dillip K Swain made a comment on a poem titled A Rejoinder. "You are free, frank and truthful. You are a knowledgeable and learned person. I have depth in sankrit. Your review is a so meticulous. I like your personality! ! "

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 September 2022

This is an elegant poem. I love this beautiful poem. Top score!

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Thank You, Dillipji, for your time reading the poem and sharing your comments on it. Much obliged

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Immense gratitude Dillipji. Your words make my day.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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