Sunday, September 11, 2022

Flowers 01 - Fragrance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fragrance
is the music
of flowers;
while a Champa
...
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I've smelled some horrible fragrances and heard some horrible music.

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I'm like a Champa while my wife is like a Jasmine! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

Damn! I THOUGHT I heard a Nightingale ourside my window, BUT they don't live around here. It must have been coming from our collection of shrubs! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I believe at least two of these three words could be interchangeable: vociferous, cacophonous, loud. If so, you are being redundant, but I'll 'chalk it up' to Poetic License.

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

VOCIFEROUS (adjective) '1 Making, given to, or marked by noisy and vehement outcry.' I've never met a vociferous plant I didn't like.

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

Poet's Notes may be handy for some, but I KNOW all things about all things, including 100s or thousands of species names! ! ! Believe me? You shouldn't. : )

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Thank You, Bri for delving so deep into the poem, my use of words and the images I used in trying to convey something different. This is essentially what I feel about the odour/fragrance that flowers exude. There are hundreds of flowers that are odourless too.

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Anjandev Roy 12 September 2022

Justly beautiful........

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2022

I love this perfumed poem. Top score!

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Thank You, Dillipji. So happy that you enjoyed the poem

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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