Flowers 01 - Fragrance Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Flowers 01 - Fragrance

Rating: 5.0


Fragrance
is the music
of flowers;
while a Champa
is vociferous,
cacophonous and loud,
Jasmine sings
like a nightingale.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet's Note: (1) Champa/ Champaca, Magnolia or Michelia is a historical genus of flowering plants belonging to the family Magnoliaceae. (2) Jasmine: a genus of shrubs and vines in the olive family (Oleaceae) consisting of around 200 species native to tropical and warm temperate regions of Eurasia, Africa, and Oceania.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

Poet's Notes may be handy for some, but I KNOW all things about all things, including 100s or thousands of species names! ! ! Believe me? You shouldn't. : )

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Thank You, Bri for delving so deep into the poem, my use of words and the images I used in trying to convey something different. This is essentially what I feel about the odour/fragrance that flowers exude. There are hundreds of flowers that are odourless too.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 September 2022

I love this perfumed poem. Top score!

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Thank You, Dillipji. So happy that you enjoyed the poem

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Anjandev Roy 12 September 2022

Justly beautiful........

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I've smelled some horrible fragrances and heard some horrible music.

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I'm like a Champa while my wife is like a Jasmine! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

Damn! I THOUGHT I heard a Nightingale ourside my window, BUT they don't live around here. It must have been coming from our collection of shrubs! bri : )

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

I believe at least two of these three words could be interchangeable: vociferous, cacophonous, loud. If so, you are being redundant, but I'll 'chalk it up' to Poetic License.

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Bri Edwards 13 September 2022

VOCIFEROUS (adjective) '1 Making, given to, or marked by noisy and vehement outcry.' I've never met a vociferous plant I didn't like.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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