Flower Vendor Comments

I can’t even shed tears” he chuckled “Severe water problem here” shows the pun and fun of words....humble living with full joy.... the plight is in viewers sight and mind indeed.... well written.........rgrds/salu

this perfume attracts the mind in many ways +10 from me

Thanks for bringing to our consciousness the plight of many workers who despite earning little still provide us necessary and many times delightful services.

A VERY INTROSPECTIVE POEM.......

You had express some forms in realities of poor and little potatoes. very nice poem in very good depth

like a deep emotional scheme of human tragic, yet! Enlightening to hold the value of life and the person as point of reference...... a poem that keeps the essence of important of each person...wonderful indeed on the dialogue, the moment of sharing comes the most reveling value of love....I like to read more and more.....thank for sharing....God bless a 10 +++++

sorrowful fact written nicely! verses are ammmmmazing! And your observations praiseworthy! 10+

superb dipiction of a life less complicated, but no less fulfilling Heath

well penned poem! a real story

The poem inspires one to fight it out in life and not surrender. Good work.

A very sad poem and thanks for enlighting me about your culture. We have poor in all countries, but your poem makes it more personal. Thanks for sharing. Please read my 'O'er Yon Mountain'. Your friend Lynn

surely a wonderful write..........the last para touched me most...... liked it........

Thank you for sharing this - made me feel humble. It shows we don't need all the rich trappings of life to be happy. You were obviously affected by this enough to pen it and now you have passed that on to us as readers. Well done 10++++

Some people choose to give from the heart to make others happy. This man is a kind soul, and life has given him a wisdom beyond earthly riches. This is a beautiful, touching story, Sathya, and a reminder of what life is truly about. Thank you for sharing! Linda : -)

beautiful heartbreaking and sooo very true....the simple naked truth about life where hope is none....

A wonderful poem Sathya, I enjoyed reading about the flower vendor, 10 Lynda xx

A nice down to earth poem! 10! -Raj Nandy

your flower vendor has become memorable becuase of his humane qualities. lovely composition.10++ please read Jasmine flower seller. its in the book also Mamta

Your flower vender is an unforgettable soul. You bring his warmth alive in your poem. Thank you. Kind regards, Sandra

a good write on the hard realities of ordinary lives...well composed...thanks...10