Flower Vendor Poem by Sathya Narayana

Flower Vendor

Rating: 5.0


FLOWER VENDOR
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I know him for past thirty years;
a door to door flower vendor;
short, lean, dark with gullible stares
and a basket around his shoulders.

'How much do you earn? ' once I asked
way back in eighties, if Im right.
'Enough to fill half belly! ' he laughed
'Yet I am happy and content.'

Few days ago, I lost my way
in the gossamer of our town lanes
when I found him in some grimy alley.
Asked, ' Are you selling here your jasmines? '

'I live here Sir.' with a smile he said
'In fact I can live only here
with the profit my flowers yield...
hand to mouth, same life from years.'

'You look worried sir! ' he added
'I endured this life for years.
I cant even shed tears.' he chuckled
'Severe water problem here! '

Well! I started looking askance
Is this the place for a humble man
who pours into our lives fragrance
a dirty lane near to a sewer line? ! !

(NOTE: On an average a door to door flower vendor earns Rs.30/= to Rs.50/= per day as per my survey)

Tuesday, July 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 10 August 2009

like a deep emotional scheme of human tragic, yet! Enlightening to hold the value of life and the person as point of reference...... a poem that keeps the essence of important of each person...wonderful indeed on the dialogue, the moment of sharing comes the most reveling value of love....I like to read more and more.....thank for sharing....God bless a 10 +++++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 August 2009

sorrowful fact written nicely! verses are ammmmmazing! And your observations praiseworthy! 10+

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Heath Gunn 10 August 2009

superb dipiction of a life less complicated, but no less fulfilling Heath

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Deependra Kumar Jha 09 August 2009

well penned poem! a real story

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Siddharth Singh 06 August 2009

The poem inspires one to fight it out in life and not surrender. Good work.

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Salu Salu 27 September 2009

I can’t even shed tears” he chuckled “Severe water problem here” shows the pun and fun of words....humble living with full joy.... the plight is in viewers sight and mind indeed.... well written.........rgrds/salu

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Julius Luke Victorio 30 August 2009

this perfume attracts the mind in many ways +10 from me

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Ben Gieske 23 August 2009

Thanks for bringing to our consciousness the plight of many workers who despite earning little still provide us necessary and many times delightful services.

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Gargi Saha 16 August 2009

A VERY INTROSPECTIVE POEM.......

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Cheung Shun Sang 11 August 2009

You had express some forms in realities of poor and little potatoes. very nice poem in very good depth

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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