Flower Vase Comments

Bharati, , Thanks for the vase! ! ! I shall cherish it FOREVER! ! ! The flowers I plan to toss in the dust bin after your next visit. Please replace them with plasitc ones, as I'm allergic to 'live' ones. thanks. bri : )

'I smile my flowers In different colors' this line I especially liked and will contemplate for awhile in thought.

Thank you for reading my poem, When Innocence Is Crushed, which runs with the same insight.

A profound poem well crafted imbued with meaningful message, embellished with great metaphors and images. A marvelous poem that shows empathy.

In every fiber of this poem, sadness lurks. A great depiction on how someone is unfairly treated. The closure lines speak of the said treatment.

A poem of great depth. There is subtlety in the manner this wonderful poem was crafted yet it created a great impact in the heart and mind of a reader.

A magnificent poem... appreciated!

Wow beautifully touching and beautifully heart felt! .. Ever so moving! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++

In the tears of my heart! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Thank you Subas Chandra Chakra, Dr. Dillip Kumar Swain, Seema Chowdhury, and Loke Kok Yee for your kind appreciation of my poems.Wish all my friends a very Happy New Year.Let beautiful poems fill your pages.

No more will I have flowers cut, adorn my living room After reading your poem, they will only bring me gloom Thanks Geeta.

a deep meaningful and poetic rendering... deep and allegorical....hit has almost mystical connotation..aa well thought out well written simple and appealing...loved it thanx for sharing maam... :)

A nice and a lively write. Take care

A wonderful poem.. enjoyed the subtleties inscribed in your poem..10

A rare collection of sorrowful moments and the total dedication of a flower, so beautifully presented here in this poem. The poem gives a tragic touch as you go through the ending lines. Thanks for the sharing of the lovely poem. Subhas

So many incredibly beautiful and delicate and heart-piercing images in this lovely poem: I smile my flowers In different colors- - - - - - - - - - - ] .My smile is in flowers Cut from their branches The cut is dipped In the tears of my heart.- - - - - - - ] How long the flowers Can smile? They wilt in sorrow- - - - - - - - - - - - -]This is such a heart-full verse, tender to all aspects of life even to the clipping of flowers from their life-giving stems- - -10 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++

The flowers were plucked from the loving branches where at they were designed to attract the insects by their colors and fragrance, to pass a meaningful life for producing seeds and fruits. When they were plucked and put in a flower pot they passed a meaningless life. No doubt they decorated the table but when turned pale were thrown in the dust bin. A graet poem about life of the flowers.

A very good write a on the deeper significance of what we do routinely and casually. Very touching indeed. If you have time, please read my poem on a similar theme Rootless In A Vase.

Thought provoking write. Life though not separate from flower vase, Used and to be thrown into dust bin tomorrow. Loved reading it.

A great metaphoric write. Deeply insightful and creative. Indeed, every object around us has something to say about life. A vase is nothing without the flowers...but flowers wither away with the passage of time. You have masterfully captured the transitory nature of life and beauty through this thoughtful write. Kudos. A big 10.