I came across one flower
While walking in a garden
It saw me and gave a smile
I too smiled and walked
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A beautiful ode to a natural wonder. Thanks Kranthi. I love flowers and write about them all the time.
Thanks for sharing…with a flowery smile compliment 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
a fable in a dream of a poem.....fancy or real is not the end...it's the fulfillment that...life comes in a most amazing moment with the other living creature....nice and touching view.... a 10 ++++
you put all your power into 'flower to flower' it actually carried me on that journey. a ten
nice visual, extended metaphor: ''I observed its dance in wind And its dance made me sing It made me smile all my time'' well embedded into this symbolistical, descriptive poem..........10++++
This is very lovely write.. Very creative too.. I really did enjoy reading this one.. you did a good job here.. nice poem.. deserves many 10ss.. cheers and best wishes shan
A lovely graceful write. I failed to get the last comment though. liked the idea of using a beautiful flower to talk about a beautiful lover...................10+++
Words and thoughts come forth with a real grace - REAL NICE ONE
so who is this beautiful girl, that you dont want to divulge the name? beautifull write a 10++++ from me surya
a great symbolic piece.......well written craft! ! ! 10+++++++
Great imagination...it tempts to read again and again...lovely flower