Out of dust Nature's magic gives him birth
The flower is no doubt the pride of Earth.
It can be called the gift of heaven
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It is good. I've found that when I write a poem I'll leave it for a day or two then go back and reread. I will always make changes for it to end the way I intended. I will have to read more of yours.
beautiful........this is what is a flow.....continuity...and closure......i like it....