Friday, April 6, 2012

Flower Power Comments

Rating: 5.0

It really isn't funny
When the day is warm and sunny
But your nose is red and runny
Though you haven't got the flu.
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Dawn Ferrett
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John Brown 29 September 2012

I loved it Dawn. It's a ten from me.

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Heather Wilson 28 May 2012

Hay- fever at its worst, spoils all outdoor pursuits, but you wrote it so well, loved the end a 10 at least. a great poem.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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