Wednesday, September 5, 2018

Flower Locked Comments

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You locked small ventilators,
You locked all the glass windows
and you locked even the thick wooden doors.
Neither will you let anybody in
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Bharati Nayak 12 September 2018

You locked small ventilators, You locked all the glass windows and you locked even the thick wooden doors. Neither will you let anybody in Nor you'll let anyone go out, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Pink Vine Messina! I am flower locked, The chain of softness and delicacy is mighty enough to confine me here, fine sweetheart! Don't let me go anywhere. - - - - - - Wow- -what a beautiful poem.

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Valsa George 09 September 2018

Beautiful! Definitely I too would enjoy being locked within a chamber with hanging flowers!

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Nosheen Irfan 07 September 2018

Profound as all your writes are. The power of beauty and love delineated wonderfully.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 September 2018

A vivid portrayal of the beauty and wonderful attributes of the flower Pink Vine Messina. Yes, we love to be confined with the beauty of nature.. Superbly penned.10++++++*

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2018

it's more like love locked sir lovely flowers where did u get them or who sent them

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 September 2018

Beautiful poem captures one's heart, no wonder its the beautiful flower. Loved reading it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2018

O ho! Akhtar Sahab! This is such a delightful poem. The image of pink vine Messina is fabulous........10

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Luz Hanaii 05 September 2018

Yes, they tend to do that and then you don't want to cut their beauty away.

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Kelly Kurt 05 September 2018

If I had to be imprisoned, I would like it to be by flowers.

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Kostas Lagos 05 September 2018

A beautiful poem, my friend.Loved it!

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 September 2018

Excellent SIR- my loving words purely penned- like to quote So densely that the mosques, the churches and the temples, all were hidden in pink flowers. Nether I heard any call for the prayers nor I listened to the inviting bells. //// great

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