Sunday, November 5, 2006

Flower Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

You, my beloved, bring light to my soul
Before I met you, I lived on parole

Freedom, elusive, seemed so far out of reach
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Rev. Rebecca Guile Hudson
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This was nice, I think it's deeper than I actually read into it. Initially, on this reading, I focused on the beauty of the images. But I loved what you did with prison, parole.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 November 2006

I sniffed the fragrance and felt the nostalgia.

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I like the creativity of this poem and the way it flows. Thank you for sharing

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