Wednesday, December 27, 2017

Flower Girl Comments

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Clean cold floor-slabs of cast concrete,
The garden tooling section aisles brimming
With special offers of shining spades
And watering hoses,
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Rod M.Peters
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Bri Edwards 28 December 2017

wow! really cool, and not just the poem/dream. 'your father' too! but i guess the flower-girl made up for the father's surly** presence and departure. ....** or should i say SIR-ly? DID she? perhaps the answer shall be in another dream and poem. any truth to the story, i wonder. to my/our January 2018 showcase ASAP. bri :)

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Rod Mendieta 03 January 2018

Oh he was quite a character, loved and despised in equal measure by people for his uncanny knack of always speaking up his mind. He just couldn’t put up masks, and that’s why he could never get into politics!

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