good concept. but are the first 3 lines well coordinated? 'The environment is purified from you' doesn't express the idea that- the fragrance emitted from your being purifies the environment. Pl reconsider. thanks for giving the pleasure of reading a poem.
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good concept. but are the first 3 lines well coordinated? 'The environment is purified from you' doesn't express the idea that- the fragrance emitted from your being purifies the environment. Pl reconsider. thanks for giving the pleasure of reading a poem.