Friday, February 6, 2015

Flower As Savior Comments

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Flower as Savior
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Down came a feathery little soul
Of rainbow wings and slender bill
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rajesh Thankappan 19 February 2015

Deepak ji, I loved the poem for its tenderness and beauty. I imagine the little bird in its freedom has flown into its own heaven.

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Saheb Mohapatra 09 February 2015

sorry, i am here after a long spell.... it was due to some private problems.................and when i read this beautiful poem of yours i just got pleased so much that i couldn't speak anything about it....this is what we call genuine beauty.........really nice........................thanks

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Valsa George 06 February 2015

A beautiful poem! I visualize the whole scene.... a tender tired humming bird spiralling down to the earth and you sheltering it in your cupped hands and letting it feed from flowers! Once it is able to take itself on wings, you letting her out of your clasp and enjoying it soaring into higher altitudes! Lovely!

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