Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Flower 8 - The Champaka Flower Comments

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A rare flower,
That blooms on trees,
At a height well above the ground
Tantalising flowers of fine fragrance,
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
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Vrinda 19 March 2021

Fresh refreshing poem on Champaka

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Jayaram 03 November 2020

A wonderful poem on Champaka flower.

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Indulekha Menon 01 November 2020

Such a lively poem on one of my favourite flower Champaka wherein through the poem er can feel the vibrant fragrance in its absence too. The poet Dr. Geeta has also corelated this flower to Radha krishna. Thsnks for another great poem. No words to describe.

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Valsa George 09 September 2019

Indeed Champak flowers have a heady fragrance...! It can be enjoyed even from a distance! The smell reaches our nostrils with every passing breeze! We had a big Champak tree in my ancestral house! This tree had thick leaves and nice foliage. As children we used to sit in its shade and play! Your beautiful poem has revived all those sweet memories in me! Thank you Geeta for sharing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 August 2019

Tantalising flowers! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2019

Typo- sorry, it will be 'note' instead of 'not.'

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2019

It is right that....The Bees respect the Champaka / For she is their Goddess; / They do not fly up the tree, Nor disturb these royal flowers, " ....because they adore and respect Radhika, the mother of Goddess who was fond of Champaka flowers very much. You have so brilliantly composed this poem with poet's not and attractive graphic. Thank you dear madam.

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You have really and amazingly spread the exotic fragrance of Champaka Flower. Let it charm YAKSHYs and GANDHARVAS all around. Thank you Geeta Menon for your into the aromatic story of this rare flower. Thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 09 August 2019

A nice description of Champaca flower, i too never knew that bees don't go near this flower.

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2019

(2) Next, it is a wonderful poem in your Flower series. I have seen these beautiful flowers many a time but never knew much about it. This is a poetic essay on Champaka Flowers right from telling its botanical name to its link with the legend of Radha and Krishna. Thanks, Geeta ji, for sharing the same.

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2019

(1) First of all I wish to thank you for the Notes introducing us to an unusual auto-rickshaw driver happened to be a poet. That he inspired you to write this poem about 'The Champaka Flower' speaks volumes about you as a great human being, Geeta ji, before being a poet extraordinaire or anything else.

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Aniruddha Pathak 08 August 2019

Yes, you're right. I agree with what you say in the last stanza of your beautiful poem. In fact I've written a poem on this theme, but can't recall its title, nor lay my finger on it.

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2019

Please try to find out the poem on this theme and share the same with us. Thanks.

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Jane Campion 08 August 2019

Just like the Magnolia, beetles are the real pollinators.. What a delightful poem showing high skill as a poetess. Thank you for commenting on my poems. I really look forward to them.

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

Again, you share a lovely story with us- I can almost breath in the melodious scent of the Champaka flowers, giving such a taste of exotic life filled with poetry and perfume. Magnificent poem telling of secrets of the Champaka and all blessed under Radhika. I so much enjoyed the poem and the fabulous story of the poet.

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Kostas Lagos 07 August 2019

Your poems are the most pleasant way for someone to learn indian traditions and stories

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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 August 2019

" Bees breathing in the fragrance of Champaka flowers and enjoying their beauty with reverence is indeed one of the wonders created by the nature and the creator. Weaving a beautiful mythological story around this aspect is really out standing achievement of the muse. Thanks for sharing.10+++ points.

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