Flower 6 - Thetchi Or Ixora - The Red Jungle Flame Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Flower 6 - Thetchi Or Ixora - The Red Jungle Flame

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My 'Thetchi' garden plume,
Whistling away like a happy groom,
When they smile and bloom,
My heart shoos away all gloom.

Many petals stand together unblemished,
Red profusion of cool November,
Red fluorescence like a ravishing bouquet,
Merry red 'Jungle Flame' undaunted.

Flowers bold that catch your attention,
Blissful flowers that unite the lovers,
Bright cluster of flowers that glows like a flame,
Flowers of beauty and worship in temples.

‘Thetchi' flowers remind you of the promises made,
A lesson that one should never shirk or break,
A strong value to stand with strength and unity,
Together, you win the loving grace of Almighty.

Edited the Poem of four verses with four lines.
Rhyme Scheme ABBA

Flower 6 - Thetchi Or Ixora - The Red Jungle Flame
Thursday, December 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,flowers,together,strength,red
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
‘Thetchi' is a Malayalam word for the wild flower named Jungle flame. It is botanically named as Ixora Coccinea.In Hindi, it is called Rukmini.I grow them in my balcony garden. This is a picture of the flower captured in my camera.This plant is a branching shrub seen along moist forests near sea coast.It is seen plenty in Kerala too and is used as a flower for worship, specially in temples where Lord Krishna is the Deity. The word ‘Archana' means offering flowers as worship to God.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2017

Whistling away like a happy groom, When they smile and bloom, My heart shoos away all gloom. you shall never schrink or break.. such wonderful lines, ur meditation on flower at your balcony. reveals again how poetic ur mind is dear Lalitha Geeta

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Thank you, Tony for your wonderful and sweet comment. Stay blessed and happy always you Tony.

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Seema 08 December 2017

This is such a beautiful and a tense write, Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you Seema for reading, commenting and sharing your thoughts. God bless.

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Rajnish Manga 17 December 2017

The following lines remind me of an Urdu translation of Kavivar Bihari's couplet: Green ‘Tulasi' that matches the flame of Lord Krishna मेरी भवबाधा हरो, राधा नागरि सोय / जा तन की झांई परे, स्याम हरित दुति होय..... कविवर बिहारी मेरे अफ़कारे दुनिया दूर कीजे राधिका रानी / कि जिनके सायएतन से हरे हों श्याम नूरानी..... स्व. मुंशी देवीप्रसाद 'प्रीतम'

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Jayaram 03 November 2020

A beautiful poem indeed. Thetchi flowers are a symbol of Unity which creates strength.

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Indulekha Menon 31 October 2020

A beautiful poem on tetchi a divine flower used for offerings to the temples in Kerala. Indeed this flower teaches, lesson to stand united irrespective of all hurdles in life. Congrats to the poet Dr. Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

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Indulekha Menon 31 October 2020

Awesome poem in the bold red thetchi flower which is a, divine flower offered to the templesbin Kerala. Indeed the thetchi flowers teaches us a lesson to stand united irrespective of all hurdles in life. Congretjkationscto the poet

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Vrinda 31 October 2020

Beautiful poem , the bold red Thetchi is bright red colour standing in bunch together .

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Loke Kok Yee 04 January 2018

We have Ixora of all colours here but unfortunately, there are no poets here who can write a poem on them as beautifully as you. Thanks Geeta.

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