Friday, September 18, 2009

Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

who has awaken me from my slumber,
is it but the sun that shines upon my face,
or is it my Friend the bees that doth drink from me
may be its the rain that brings me drink this day
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Paul Cutting
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Eyan Desir 21 September 2009

How long did you live as a flower? thanks for making us know how life is good write

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Patti Masterman 18 September 2009

Love the delicate language that's here and love the last lines, very skillful: 'to make the best of this place were I will stay for all of my life for as many days. '

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