Flower Comments

Nice work with the muse of life and nature. Thanks for sharing.

good write, i enjoyed reading it..

I understand, generally speaking what the poem says. But it doesn't have to be so complicated to understand. The words individually, may be beautiful. But it is not the beautiful word that makes poetry, it is the conbination of words and their clarity of meaning. GW62

Has a nice rhythm and I enjoy the imagery. You have an intriguing way of presenting your thoughts which means that this is poetry.

with my raining eyes Water you to grow Have I no harvest, but thorn To stuck my fingers...............................unique imagery with thoughts surchaged with powerful emotion yet blended beautifully, that deserves its merit