Flow Of Time - 4 Strings Ofhay (Na)ku [ Hay (Na)ku # 5 ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Flow Of Time - 4 Strings Ofhay (Na)ku [ Hay (Na)ku # 5 ]

Rating: 5.0


Time
Flies unnoticed
Like changing tides

Flowing
And moving
Like a river

Marching
Forward steadily
Never to return

Fleeting
Moments pass
Becomes a memory

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2022

Yes dear poetess, time passes on...fleeting moments pass! Who can say what happens in the next moment. A wonderful poem from my favorite poetess Nudershada! Top score! !

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Robert Murray Smith 22 June 2018

The point about time it flows into the past. A good write.++10

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Paul Brookes 03 June 2018

lifes river forever moving eddies that fall and flow and we end in the sea of eternity Great write 10 +++

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Thank you Paul for the insightful comment.

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