Sunday, September 2, 2012

Flow Flames, Portrait Poems Comments

Rating: 3.5

Volcanic island's birth surmise
gold horizon peeks arched sunrise,
untouched sand winds arms outstretched molds
sculpt minute grains soft earthen folds.
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Captain Cur
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 August 2018

Rain nurtures, pulsing rays pervade foliage green, blue caves deep enclave, cloud whiskered skies eternal flows new island soul incarnate grows. new island soul.. what a fine expression. loved it. thank u dear poet. tony

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Walterrean Salley 05 September 2012

Rain nurtures, pulsing rays pervade foliage green, blue caves deep enclave, cloud whiskered skies eternal flows new island soul incarnate grows. The aura of Natural beauty and the intrigue of rebirth. Love how you’ve blended the various elements, including the skies. Especially love the last stanza. Lovely portrait, Captain, beautifully and gracefully done.

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