Flouting The Human Norms Comments

Flow of the piece is excellent, excellent is the idea. Last two conclusive stanzas are brilliant. Love with my 10.

a poem telling a truth...this is the plight of many a senior citizen all over the world...rich or poor...left by their wards unwanted and uncared...good poem 10

Great poem to ponder for the young to discover the pain of aged knees and to understand as they should grow older to respect their aged brothers. thanks, melvin