Thursday, February 19, 2009

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I love the smell of the sea
All around gulls fly free
Waves rolling lazily in and more
Breaking spreading right along the shore
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Gordon D Wilkinson
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Steve Blair 15 March 2009

Wonderful stuff - Laurena is right - when I was caught up in the middle of this poem, I was on that beach. Lovely.

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Bob Gibson 19 February 2009

I hear your gulls, and smell seaweed i feel the sand, and i feel your need! those crashing waves, i love the sound when i'm alone and outward bound thank you

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Gordon D Wilkinson

Gordon D Wilkinson

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