Monday, January 26, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ****florence Of Beauty****! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love
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Gargi Saha 24 May 2009

A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++

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Susan Jarvis 09 May 2009

So jam-packed full of elaborate expression, my eyes are rolling and my head is reeling! S :)

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Ruth Walters 09 May 2009

So blue is the sky like the sweet hue of his eyes wistfully watching. There you see, you've brought me to verse..... Ruthy : -)

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what a beautiful way of writing and what a beautiful green lands with music sound in it's background...10+++++

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Maya Hershey 14 April 2009

its interesting... it seems like you have really been looking at a kind of perfect sight of nature, blue sky fresh wind..... i enjoyed reading it..nice description... bring up the good work! !

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Randy Hogan 20 February 2009

pure energy...the electricity shines in your poem....

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Alicia Maestri 20 February 2009

Ravenously seductive.

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A great mystery sometimes revealing and teasing and other times so deep it's difficult to penetrate the truth in front of us.Very lovely.Gave you a ten.Please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS if you have a chance-comments and voting are welcomed...thanks.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

Poem rich, full of the smell, the smiles, green, and all additions embellishing the entire description. It is pleasantly reading. The author is knowing the topic very well and he knows what wants to hand over. '...a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love...' '...the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk...' '...as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow...' Beatiful fragments and the beautiful poetry to whom it is worthwhile returning. Thank you :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 February 2009

this one ever better, very eloquent, good use of words, is a privilege to read your work, thanks.

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Terry B 12 February 2009

What a beautiful poem, excellent. Imagery is just awesome.

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Shannon ... 11 February 2009

Very lyrical! Thank you for sharing.10+

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James Roberts 10 February 2009

I really enjoyed this one great imagery and use of metaphore jim

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Lynda Robson 09 February 2009

Great imagery and flow to this piece, well done 10 Lynda xx

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Marvin Brato 08 February 2009

D efinitely a genius write r eckons intelligence which only a few got!

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Ruby Heart 07 February 2009

each word have some meaning in them, very nice on how you put togather it. beautiful!

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Alison Cassidy 07 February 2009

You take a hatful of words (carefully chosen) and scatter them, like confetti, across the page. The result is a collage of images, both visual, aural, and emotional that lingers in the mind's eye. Florence is your inspiration - the poem is distinctly yours. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Moushumi moushumi 07 February 2009

All the words in this poem mused in my ear all the time & literally silhouetted in the pages where i treasure.10+

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Eyan Desir 07 February 2009

Thoughtful, very well written, ..........nice poem.....

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C. P. Sharma 06 February 2009

Dr. Subhendu, your poetry moves with the choicest diction and the music of the melting words and embeded with the superb mystical imagery. CP

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