Florence of beauty tunes through the joy
Art of blue jingles fledging distant sky silhouetted
what a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily
new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love
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So jam-packed full of elaborate expression, my eyes are rolling and my head is reeling! S :)
So blue is the sky like the sweet hue of his eyes wistfully watching. There you see, you've brought me to verse..... Ruthy : -)
what a beautiful way of writing and what a beautiful green lands with music sound in it's background...10+++++
its interesting... it seems like you have really been looking at a kind of perfect sight of nature, blue sky fresh wind..... i enjoyed reading it..nice description... bring up the good work! !
A great mystery sometimes revealing and teasing and other times so deep it's difficult to penetrate the truth in front of us.Very lovely.Gave you a ten.Please read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS if you have a chance-comments and voting are welcomed...thanks.
Poem rich, full of the smell, the smiles, green, and all additions embellishing the entire description. It is pleasantly reading. The author is knowing the topic very well and he knows what wants to hand over. '...a lone muse intones along moon stuck lily new born dream expires sprucing the grace of love...' '...the whole entirety entices bestowing from heaven yet silky passion assuaged by winds from the musk...' '...as songs of joy ripples across garden of heaven eyes yet croons up with hope of vernal tomorrow...' Beatiful fragments and the beautiful poetry to whom it is worthwhile returning. Thank you :) Maria Barbara Korynt
this one ever better, very eloquent, good use of words, is a privilege to read your work, thanks.
I really enjoyed this one great imagery and use of metaphore jim
D efinitely a genius write r eckons intelligence which only a few got!
each word have some meaning in them, very nice on how you put togather it. beautiful!
You take a hatful of words (carefully chosen) and scatter them, like confetti, across the page. The result is a collage of images, both visual, aural, and emotional that lingers in the mind's eye. Florence is your inspiration - the poem is distinctly yours. Beautiful. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
All the words in this poem mused in my ear all the time & literally silhouetted in the pages where i treasure.10+
Dr. Subhendu, your poetry moves with the choicest diction and the music of the melting words and embeded with the superb mystical imagery. CP
A lovely poem. Love & hugs..........u get 10++++++