Friday, March 22, 2019

Flooded Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

The most incredible part, the mind.
Always flooded with thoughts that doesn't mind.
Hell yes, It's overflowing with mixed thoughts,
mixed emotions, mixed feelings, indecisiveness,
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Jongoni Sripriya
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Chinedu Dike 26 September 2019

Beautiful conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with conviction. An insightful work of art.

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Jongoni Sripriya 27 September 2019

Thank you! ! Chinedu Dike

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 May 2019

The brain continues to develop daily newer synapses keep on springing like ideas come to a MILITARY COMMANDER OR A POLITICIAN keep on thinking listen to every one like your beloved staff they have more details for you to grasp then salute your own MIND GRIND AND A HAPPY SOLUTION FIND if you succeed you must be humble and if you fail accept the tumble and RISE like Maya...CONTD

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Jongoni Sripriya 11 May 2019

Nice thoughts " If you succeed you must be humble and if you fail accept the tumble and rise"

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 April 2019

The most creative part, the mind. Often forgets that nothing is permanent. Even the biggest problems, toughest challenges, Miserable circumstances, are eager to pass. this poem is pure wisdom. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Jongoni Sripriya 08 April 2019

Thank you Tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 March 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Sripriya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jongoni Sripriya 29 March 2019

Thank you, That means a lot

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2019

t's overflowing with mixed thoughts, mixed emotions, mixed feelings, indecisiveness, and what not. yes human mind is a great mystery...... in the poet's notes you give us an impression you have attained the wisdom beyond your age. wish u well. write more and more. thank u. tony

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Jongoni Sripriya 29 March 2019

Thank you very much

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Prabir Gayen 28 March 2019

Beautiful poem.... well penned... Thanks.....///////

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Jongoni Sripriya 28 March 2019

Thank you sir

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