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Anger,
My anger comes in waves,
And then pausing
My tears come like rivers
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Evocative, but not satisfying...'salt baths of fluid' is a beautiful, yet weird enough line to grab my attention.The imagery? ...sorry done that, seen that, bought the t-shirt.
swimming to the bottom of the dead sea...very good i like the transformations and the imagery. very vivid. thanks.
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8/3/2025 1:14:08 AM # 1.0.0
You're right, anger does come in waves. But tears creating a river? been there, done that... but i can't complain coz i've done the same... we all need to think up some new imagery!