Friday, May 24, 2013

Floating On Comments

Rating: ★5.0

You keep your dreams close
And it makes me smile
For every breath you take makes it worthwhile.
We shared true love.
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Garett Ryan
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Julie Schleppegrell 06 June 2013

This is a sweet poem for your love. Nicely written ;) Dallas Neighbor... Definitely a 10 for you.

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Richardson Greg 03 June 2013

Don't be so caught up with rhyming. If it isn't forced, rhyme all you want, but don't be shackled by the desire to rhyme. Try using half-rhyme as well. Keep up the good work!

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