Floating On The Breeze Comments

This is a very well structured poem with its diverse rhyming patterns. I like the matter of fact voice of the narrator with his touch of angst lurking behind the optimistic theme of finding a door into meaning. Your have a good ear for poetry, John and great emotional depth to your words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Yep, I believe many of us have felt like this at some stage...very well thought out..another 10

What a great poem! Very well constructed and and frightenly familiar to my own daily grind... And is that a Pat Benatar reference I see? Well done! ! ~Ray