Floating Comments

People come and go but time contanstly and contineously flows on on and on........Appreciated the undelying philosophy of this sagacious poem. Full marks........

To capture a feeling is elusive, once you concentrate upon it the shape changes and slips away. Your words shine a light upon that liquid reality....well done Nosheen!

Time flowing In the sea and the clouds Its wings never tired.......so touching and true. Time flows without rest. A beautiful poem nicely executed.10

Wow! Poignant chain of images, very emotive.. Time and clouds have wings, wings that are never tired. But how their flight affects us! ! ! 100+++

Time is omnipresent.

The last three lines stand as the epitome of this beautiful little poem...10