Saturday, December 3, 2005

Float , , , , , , , , , , , , Comments

Rating: 4.5

DERELICTS, invisible priets,
whale bones underneath my
dreams.
WINOS, muddle in soot, wake
...
Read full text

DAVID GERARDINO
COMMENTS
Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 December 2005

I enjoyed reading 'Float' very much! check your 'priests' out! David...'up says the bottle, it's time to sing...' maybe? 'scattered' confetti? ...Just thoughts. LSP

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success