Walked to her room
The time was somewhere around noon
Had flowers in my hand
And my approach well-planned
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Well, that is quite the poem Ashish! Once again a funny one...and well all I could say to you is Ha Ha Ha...U keep doing that and you will be biting alot of dirt! ((Smile)) Great poem! Keep writing. =Shelley=
Caught in the act eh Ashish, don't ya just hate when that happens. Excellent poem Ashish---Melvina---
Ashish, This one's brilliant and very hilarious, its like a hindi movie plot.LOL good work! Preets
that was real funny ashish...great rhyme and well written poem...after the dirt eating i hope you will be again ready for more! ! ! LOL...love...nalini
The way of telling and incident in the frame of poetry is awesome.....loved it.....but why did u stoped writing......start writing your emotions and experience once again.....thank you so much for sharing :)