Friday, August 11, 2006

Flirt Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walked to her room
The time was somewhere around noon
Had flowers in my hand
And my approach well-planned
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Ashish Ram
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Abhilasha Bhatt 03 February 2016

The way of telling and incident in the frame of poetry is awesome.....loved it.....but why did u stoped writing......start writing your emotions and experience once again.....thank you so much for sharing :)

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Riza Flores 22 May 2008

nice one! nice poem..i like it positive! hahaha..more powers

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 17 April 2007

Well, that is quite the poem Ashish! Once again a funny one...and well all I could say to you is Ha Ha Ha...U keep doing that and you will be biting alot of dirt! ((Smile)) Great poem! Keep writing. =Shelley=

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Melvina Germain 17 April 2007

Caught in the act eh Ashish, don't ya just hate when that happens. Excellent poem Ashish---Melvina---

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Saad Ansari 29 November 2006

kool thought man! i like it... keep it up.

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John K 20 September 2006

dude i love this poem its great love the ending

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Preeti - is here! 13 August 2006

Ashish, This one's brilliant and very hilarious, its like a hindi movie plot.LOL good work! Preets

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Nalini Hebbar 11 August 2006

that was real funny ashish...great rhyme and well written poem...after the dirt eating i hope you will be again ready for more! ! ! LOL...love...nalini

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