Flip-Flop! Clip-Clap! Boo-Boo Cried Solo Bobby – Trapped In A Booby-Trap! Comments

very new style of telling some thing....lot of poetic device..used..forcefull..emotion..expressed...good language..after all a new point of view...nice poem i like it.....

You must really have a great sense of humor Harry dear. Your expressions caused me to giggle. Loneliness are not funny, but from your point of view, it does sound like fun, up to a certain point. Beautiful poem.

Flip-flop! Clip-clap! Boo-boo cried solo Bobby – trapped in the Booby-trap! Clip-clop went the horse's hop – lonely Johny weeps in the lonely shop! This poem is so like a song and beautiful though it was about loneliness. I enjoyed reading it very much! Thanks for sharing.

Playful piece of work. Song like.

'Aloneness greets me seventy times seven and 24/7 with a mess! Aloneness is a burning hole inside me with a hallow emptiness.... Aloneness is tearing me apart and pulling my only heart apart! Aloneness is perfect but hopelessness and darkness in your heart.' I love how every poem, consist of some form or shape or hint of lonliness, truly a beautiful poem. :)

Since loneliness is new to me, I understand your poems much better. And I keep reading it again and again to find sweet courage, but it does not help... It's very colorfully written, for such a black emotion...

Clip-clop went the horse's hop-Lonely Johny weeps in the lonely shop-I like this lines! ! ! beautiful! ! ! ! (((Aloneness is a burning hole inside me with a hallow emptiness))))) , , again a new definition I could see in this poem; ; ; what a fantastic write my fellow poet.. You are absolutey a great writer...if you don't mind I'll call you as a Mutant in the world of poetry and have a good mutation of words. 10 silver plates for you! ! ! !

Hahaha I enjoyed this poem a lot, You always have such immaculate lines! :)