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Impressive train of poetic thought. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. :)

very strong..full of emotions..sentiments... the depth is amazing and the thoughts are excellent.. expressing one's emotions into this strong, appealing piece.. hitting to the core... the flings of sorrow..the flings of uncertainties.. flows with depth... 10++++

The depth at what you write is insane.. that was done amazingly :)

urges my nerve to listen and talk....the inner revolution experienced with in the my whole life memories.....a mystical poem..holding every lines to breathe beyond natural force.....each has to feel every lines....so deep....such a wonderful poem...God less

very moving poem, i like it so much keep up the good work and i invite u to take a look of my humble poems if time permits

a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

a wonderful powerful feeling and writing filled by the deep truth which spring from a pure soul who seek the beauty of rhe shores but do the moon hide...in his turn he will return to light the shores and to light the darkest nights...10++++++++++ where are those tiding whelms from hide speckles ocean pierce into air unfailing whispering dew of roses basking in glow moon seemingly snored in valley of obscurity mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void

Very powerful poem buut what is the connecting theme Thanks for sharing.

mystery uncover the fling of sorrow..a nice poem, expressive...sorrow? ..whew, i don't know how to prevent them..it comes when you're not ready, it stays and can't escape..hope i could find a place where sorrow couldn't see me..this is a good poem dear Dr Kar...naizz

A beautiful write throughout, 'rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void' excellent

Good and evil, day and night, love and hate is all the reality of eternal nature....a heart surrendering His feet balances well with the opponent....I like the last two lines...nice

Beautiful poem. Good imagination is worth the poems. Frenzies of sadness - you say. Yes, sadness has different shades, similarly to joy. To this topic it is possible still a lot to say and to write. Your approach to the topic very much suits me. You know what you are writing about, you are doing it with the belief and beautiful. I am reading with pleasure. - 'rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void ' - 'mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow' - perhaps, but must not I am reading your poem with pleasure. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

'mystery may uncover the flings of sorrow night when chilled being chiseled of snow do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void ' sorrow is only from our hearts..it handed down into our sensitive feelings..this poem expressess on how we should handle loneliness without being so affected..as it is said, it is a fling..grace

This is life after all, full of joy and sorrows May be with a little knowledge of eternal bliss We may escape the side effects of sorrow. A good write on the flings of sorrow Makes me think the ways to escape. Thank you dear poet.

''do we ever know the eternity by reality? rainbow is ephemeral by voyage to void'' deep sensibility, deep feeling.......10++

Nicely crafted piece with good imagery.

nice imagery, finely put......

this is like a dream of sorrows

a butiful picture of the moonlit shore wrapped with flings of sorrow.10