Saturday, July 4, 2009

Flinging Singing Shaking Comments

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Words flinging. Hands singing. Bodies shaking.
It was all in the making.
You try to fight for your right to speak your mind.
Only to be interrupted in the beginning and find he doesn't care.
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Lacie Wasserman
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Deborah Cromer 04 July 2009

I imagine you. You are standing there. Your mouth closed, your hands silent and your body still. Just giving the 'look' and walking away. Having all the control and power you need. You do have rights, you need not be interupted, nor be shushed. But, there is a smile involved in your poem, so maybe it's okay? :) Lots to imagine in this poem. Could be just a big debate... I would hate for you not to be heard, if you had something to say. DC

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