Friday, May 3, 2013

Flightless Comments

Rating: 4.8

Little hatchling eager to learn to fly
To follow the birds that bid him bye.

Little bird provoked by winds,
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Ricky June Espanueva
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Ellen Mendez 19 May 2013

, , , ...... (' -') ............. free? i wonder how it feels like :)

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very nice poems, not only did it tie together nicely the rhythm was also flowing.

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