Thursday, July 27, 2006

Flight Of The Unlimited Comments

Rating: 5.0

Stand before this ocean, on a cliff face of probabilities
The breeze against my face, the expanse of many seas
Tip my brow to the air, and take a step from this place
Fall just a moment, before flight catches upward grace
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Francesca Johnson 27 July 2006

Just to add, it's now in my Favourites Box. Fran xx

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Francesca Johnson 27 July 2006

What a masterpiece! I felt like I was flying along with you, and experiencing the world as you did, touching the whale and the snow on the mountain top. I would like to give it a score way above 10 but alas.......... Love, Fran xx

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