Monday, June 25, 2018

Flight Of The Runaway Kite Comments

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Through the tumultuous night the storm reigned

The kite I held so tight caught away on the winds
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Dawn Novus
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Thomas Plotz 26 September 2018

Let you trust that quiet whisper inside - Except at time the voice does lie, then steers you to a different end; so my Sisters and Brothers you must choose wisely. Superb poem. Thank you.

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Irfanulla Shariff 08 July 2018

Wonderful imagery. Beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 July 2018

Calm and warm! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 June 2018

Stirring a cause upon the river eternity amazes mind. Wonderful poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned here. Dew kisses perfection and petals motivate mind. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned. Kite takes interesting runway...10

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Michael Eziudo 25 June 2018

Awwwww. I held my heart as I read through this. I just am speechless. It's beautiful. Well done

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