Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Flight Of Fancy Comments

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My fate for me had ensured,
Traveler's foot and an explorer's galore.
I took a fancy to explore new lands,
My spirit soared for newer plans.
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Renu Kakkar
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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) thanks for Poet's Notes. line 2: explorers galore. you were fated to meet many explorers, like yourself? or did you want the word explorations? stanza 6: it's :) another favorite line: Soon I was again in me looking at him. i wonder what the angel told friends about YOU. to MyPoemList. and i plan to use this in my PH November 2018 showcase of poems by poets of the Indian subcontinent. Thanks. bri :)

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Renu Kakkar 25 April 2019

Thanks, a typing error there, will correct it. As regards 'in me and looking at him' means the soul getting back into the body. Why should the angel say anything to his friends? I have not mentioned anything about it. As regards showcasing my poem, please show case poems of famous poets. I just write to please myself and poem hunter is a place where I keep my poems to retrieve them as and when I need them.

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Renu Kakkar 25 April 2019

Thank you. A typing error there and I will correct. The poem is about a soul moving out of the body guided by an angel. Who that angel is. I have not specified. As regards showcasing this poem, please showcase poems by famous poets of India. I write to please myself.

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

some favorite lines: Gently leading me out of the window pane, To my surprise, I stood by the plane. ...i got a slight laugh from the second line :) i 'love' the title for its alliteration and its truth**. ** fancy (noun) 2. the faculty of imagination. my research assistant is prone to flights of fancy ha! Google used the same alliteration in this usage example. (cont.)

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Renu Kakkar 25 April 2019

Thanks. This is a dream not daydream (Flight of fancy) can also mean that. People are asleep and the soul moves out of the body.

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 July 2017

Nice poeticdream. You may like to read my poem, Poet Hunter. Thanks

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Renu Kakkar

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