Monday, April 16, 2012

Flight Of Fancy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our sofa was a spaceship.
We soared between the stars
Visiting distant planets
Like Jupiter and Mars.
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Dawn Ferrett
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Heather Wilkins 02 December 2013

I have often in childhood wanting a magic carpet so I could fly away. Your couch would serve the purpose just fine. Lovely thoughts of childhood.

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Adeline Foster 15 July 2013

A very good poem. Reminds one of Robert L Stevenson. Read mine - Flies Flies Adeline

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Kevin Halls 02 September 2012

I wonder if I could get a sofa like that on Ebay? Funny poem and well written.

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Ruth Walters 30 August 2012

how wonderful, I wish I had a sofa like that!

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Heather Wilson 16 April 2012

What good times you had, such a well written poem and fun to read.

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Dawn Ferrett

Dawn Ferrett

Portsmouth, Hampshire
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