Sunday, September 4, 2011

Flight Of A Sixteen Year Old Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

She runs from pain like she hides from the truth.
Honesty, integrity; things that aren't her roots.
She dreams of wings and flying away
Hopes that somehow there will be a better day.
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Angelica St. Darke 24 December 2011

This is a truly amazing piece of writing You are very talented :)

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Chelsea Crisman 29 September 2011

Thank you. And yes. I love to read poetry just as much as I love to write it.

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Vipins Puthooran 17 September 2011

It's a wonderful poem..//the mirror can't tell her the things she wishes to hear// nice line.. Excellent poetry.. May I invite you to read my new poems

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Louis Rams 05 September 2011

THIS IS SIMPLY FANTASTIC! YOU OUTDID YOURSELF ON THIS POEM. I THINK I WOULD HAVE CALLED IT ' THRU THE EYES OF A SIXTEEN YEAR OLD'. A TRIPLE TEN!

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