Saturday, June 16, 2018

Flight From Life Comments

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Without breathing,
I want a flight,
With velocity of light,
To get lost in Black Hole,
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shelly kiran
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2018

where, I feel soulful, Where the milieu stops troll, Fragile mind, Broken into millions flaws, .... this insensitive world is not for me...... you are always loved when you give love. . thank u for this poem....... getting away from thoughts of dejection by giving love.. is the only way to escape from negative thoughts. tony

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 July 2018

Hi Shelly, One should not lose heart, when faced with difficulties. For every night, there is a dawn... And, as the master poet has written, When winter is here Can spring be far behind? So, courage dear!

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Chinedu Dike 16 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Shelly.

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Naila Rais 16 June 2018

A nice write... Keep it up.. Suicide isn't the answer... Keep courage.. You may like to read my poem the last kiss with death too.. Naila

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