Flight Comments

A wonderful poem dear madam...I love your poetry!

A woman lured by a man in order to satisfy her and wishes got remorse and contrition as the man deceived her. Finally this repugnance took her to a destination unknown where Past, Present and Future merge and coalesce into the muted whispers of stillness. A heartrending depiction has been made. This is really a beautiful poem on suicide and death.10

Agony once subsided, surged back Stronger than ever before .............................................. ............................................ Never waiting for another day Of impotent remorse, ..................... so sad the end of life, touched the heart, so poignant.

very poignant hearing a soul taking to extremities..........Valsa........at the same time, I must admit that the luminosity of your poetry is unequaled.......well done........thanks for sharing.........

Sad flight, too much love kill you! Nice penning.

So sad, she could have given herself a little bit time, time heals everything: (

Pat.. How shall I thank you for your series of great comments?

Suicide is one of the issues that needs to be voiced as much as possible. This write brings out the devastating effects of this act. It can be bought about by various feelings of guilt, fear, old age, grief illness or whatever the list can go on and on. A very poignant and thought provoking write.

A sad poem indeed Valsa - such a man is not worth dying for. Very powerful write.

a sad story which of course happens in reality too....people get frustated and unable to bear the burden anymore are forced to take this step....though i feel a little care and support from the loved ones would have stopped them from committing this act, which at times goes unnoticed even by the near and dear ones

awesome ink.beautifully done to convey a tragic incident.liked it.

, , , sad tale indeed, , there are many who chose this way to end all their miseries, , , , and leaving behind their loved ones to moan for them, , , , , excellent write, ,

Tragic and ever so troubling. A very intensely written poem. direct and impactful.with many powerful lines-sad, sad, but true to often

Poignant reality. You deliver your responsibility to present it boldly. Let every one do all one can to prevent such occurrences. Thank you.

very nice work............

a very sad verse story and that too has come out of the real world...this might be the story of many living as well who are on the verge of killing themselves, they don't know that while escaping a bearable agony they are going to embrace an unbearable and unending suffering...i wish there must be a li'l note added to your poet's notes just to explain the Timelessness... which is the worst unending phase of torment as suicide is not allowed anywhere... very heartfelt poem!

she chose the easiest way out or was it the most difficult? she bore the burden of a guilt not her own. you penned it with an impacting intensity.