Flight Comments

Loved this magnificent poem dear poetess. Beautifully composed. Stay always happy and blessed!

it's an excellent poem my dear poetess Bharati. Extremely well penned. Top score!

A very beautiful truth, painful too! The baby bird will one day leave its nest and its parents, when wings sprout and it masters the art of flying. It is the rule of Nature! The nest that has been resonant with its twittering will be silent. The mother bird feels it, but should be happy that the birdie is now free to conquer the uncharted skies....! A lovely simple poem! A sure 10

How sweetly sound Their happiness filled twitters And joy is overflowing Their little nest! ......loved these lines. Beautifully penned.

When the birds learn to stand on their feet firmly and flap their wings with confidence, they take off to explore the skies. Mothers protect them till they are strong enough to fly. That is the way of the world. A beautiful poem dear Poetess Bharati........10

Beautifully written the feel of mother bird feeding tirelessly only to make him mature one day. Beautiful. Lovely feel.

A mother is an image of God. The poetess has nicely painted the image of an image.

A beautiful nature poem! So well penned......appreciated and admired.......10++

YOU may like to avoid cliches in poetry else it loses charm of real creativity MOTHER BIRD POET IS LOVELY PL DO excuse me

This is really a great sight to see mother bird feeding her chicks till they get wings and fly away to explore the sky and all things beautiful. Once the mother bird was a chick too and must have felt to see the world. Your imagination goes beyond the sky while composing this sweet and meaningful poem. Loved it. like to read it again and again.

A natural phenomena common with all living beings has so touchingly been put to a p...oem. Though all creatures have a sentimental attitude towards such separation we human beings brood over the sorrow caused by it.......10

Flying bird and the imagery in your poem are superb imaginative pleasure to read Mother bird is the true pioneer of the child bird one day will come without mother bird the child bird will fly more and more high, too far independently......

Hearty thanks Kumarmani Mahakul Sir for your wonderful words of appreciation.It is a pleasure to read your inspiring comments.

Thank you Rini Merkle for your appreciation.Yes, all creatures of nature learn to fly from their nest.It is written in nature and mother bird should not be sad when she sees her offspring fly.

Thank you Pallab Chaudhury for your poetic comment.It took a while for the comments to show on the poem page.Thanks again for reading and commenting.

The sight of feeding of a mother to her chicks is sublime. Happiness overflows. Mother bird teaches her chicks to fly. Time comes the baby bird leaves his or her mother after completing training of flying. Mother birds drops tears form her eyes. How wonderful the rules of Nature! Dear madam, the inscription made by you is so touching and vivid. A marvelous poem based on philosophy is amazingly shared. Thank you, full vote.

Silent was the nest; Noise filled in- as the mother Came with worms on beak! PC