Thursday, October 15, 2009

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Rating: ★5.0

The sun on the wall
throws rose shadows
with an invisible perfume.
The moon on the wall
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Orville Phillips 12 March 2010

A nice poem with a delicate balance of night and day...

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Sally P. P. 21 September 2019

Thankyou for your comment. Much appreciated. Sally.

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Christopher Shepheard 06 December 2009

I agree with the previous comment - wonderful ending - and the overall metaphor is subtly handled.

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Sally P. P. 22 September 2019

Many thanks for your much appreciated comment. Sally.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

‘…unfurling with early morning secrecy your wings through an open window.’ Great lines. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Sally P. P. 08 November 2019

Thanks fo comment, Niv.

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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . 23 October 2009

A stunning poem Sally with a tantalizing atmosphere. I was drawn right in to its beauty. 10 love Karin

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Sally P. P. 28 February 2020

Thanks for your comment, Karin. x

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Sandra Fowler 18 October 2009

Rich and suggestive use of mood and metaphor. Beautiful write, Sally. Your style is truly your own. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Sally P. P. 29 February 2020

Thanks for your comment, Sandra. Much appreciated.

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