+flight+++ Comments

the flight of the bird carrying the whole weight of existence is well portrayed here...

From: Larry Volz (South Africa ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/16/2009 12: 19: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Flight i like your imagination...beautiful 10 Larry

beautiful poem...nice image painted into your readers mind.....well done! !

Such sadness....the kingfisher is as bait to the stooping hawk.

From: Seraza Uzuner (Zürich Switzerland; Male; 19) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/1/2009 2: 27: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hello, dear Marieta I'd really like you to comment on my new one called 'I heard the devil cry' as soon as you got the time. By the way, i liked your, FLight'.

it is very beautifully written poem, painted the sky with colors and hue 10

I was immediately captured by your poems imagery. (10 from me)

i could almost see it all happen! the flight, theswoop and the prey.

What a striking curve, the kingfisher performed to swoop down and kill its prey. Very imaginative.

flight becoming the prey...a new imagination...presented with lovely imagery...10

wonderful imagination.. n the birds' wait to fall on the moving prey

i liked your imagination.giving the word flights a new meaning

good imagery there Marieta...well, we are all moving preys ignorant, aren't we?

Beautiful imagery...beautiful...

a great fantasy of flight. nice write.voted10 surya

it is very beautifully written poem, painted the sky with colors and hue...please keep on writing......MARIETA

Wonderful imagery Marieta!

As a deep curve of the rainbow Is the white wing of the kingfisher a beautiful illustration. shan

i could almost see it all happen! the flight, theswoop and the prey.a poem of good imagery! a10++++

wonderful imagination.. n the birds' wait to fall on the moving prey.. well penned..